My friend said that my overall work was good but would have like to see a more detailed descriptions and also maybe some synonyms. For the putting the words in the sentence he said that he liked the words i put in their but that sometimes instead of putting one word for one word I put one word for one sentence.
For my book review he said to maybe say less why he was so good and put some errores if their was o that the readers get a full understanding.
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