First I graded Roberto and this is what I put:
I think you described Count dracula very well and also the setting which was a war in the 1200 in europe also I think you could go into why he opposed who he opposed and who where his friends and why. If you read a book of vampires what does this guy have to do witha a vampire, you didn't explain that.

Then I graded Tomy Urrutia and this is what I put:
I would say this deserves a four. Something I would add is more information about the setting like what was the arena like or what was district 12 like. I for example, would add that they lived in place where the food was scarce but just outside the fence it was plentiful with food but the capitol was afraid the would run away so it had a fence. Other than that you get 2 thumbs up