lorenzo: lorenzo used very good transitinal words but i kept getting the feeling that he was avoid them because there were opurtunities to use them and he didn't use it. overall he used the words right but i would use more.
tomas: tomas did an excellent job he used them just as much as needed he put them right where they needed to be, one thing is that one time in sentecnce he did it worng and changed the whole meaning of the sentence or so i hope becaus eif not the sentence didn't make any sense
Arturo: he did a ok job he barley ised the words but he used perfect he had the chance to put them in but he didn't otherwise he would have had a job well done
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