Final Draft PSA Essay

Persuasive Essay

In 2011, various groups of people hacked into the Japanese company, SONY. All the online programs SONY had were hacked by unscrupulous groups like Lulzsec (which in native Australian means laughing at your security). Some of the networks are PlayStation Network and Sony online entertainment. Only in the UK it cost them 150 million pounds to pay the bill. If there were any case of fraud those numbers could soar up.

According to hacker’s tweets, SONY did not have a very secure protection for their users. It was relatively easy to access the users information, as SONY did not encode it. As a result, the personal information of more than 77 million users of SONYS online entertainment and PlayStation Network were stolen.

The personal information that was robbed included dates of birth, email accounts, passwords, debit and credit card numbers.

Sony apologized to its customers. But they also have offered to build real confidence for their customers. In its attempt to regain public confidence, SONY has installed many safety systems like a firewall that cost 2 million dollars to install. Also, it has hired a new security manager as well as another highly trained group of people that specializes in hackers.

The consequences of this security breach have been catastrophic for some people. For example, Mr. James Cherrick had recently invested most of his savings in SONYS stock. With this hacking, the value of the stock dropped down to half its price causing a significant loss. Mr. Cherrick now has filed for bankruptcy. Mr. Cherrick he is now poor just because a couple of people felt like making the world a worst place for everyone. Also SONY has been very affected. Experts say that it might take up to 10-20 years before customers have faith in SONY.

Why did those groups hack SONY?

They wanted to make easy money and should be ashamed of themselves. They should be spending their time working and not figuring how to ruin other people’s lives. Another theory is that the hackers are seeking revenge because they are the sons and daughters of former SONY employees that did not get what they considered a deserved promotion. What really happened was that the other employees worked way harder. 

Poster evaluation

The hacking of Sony.
That the hacking of Sony and it hurt the company
They tried to say that people misuse technology and their is many thing to do.
They did it by what happened first.
Yes because it showed us the many uses of technology and people chose to ruin people lives.
I would say to make a page and put this there.





Deforestation
That we are doing damage to the earth.
They'd made us see what people to and just waste paper.
It had no pattern.
No because it only showed people doing stuff that is wrong.
They should email this to green peace and see if they publish it in there magazine.





World hunger.
That it is the biggest problem.
They should poor children dying.
It was photo and writing
Yes it was amazing it got me thinking that I need to do more for the children.
I would go to very rich county and show this video and ask for help.


Animal abuse
That people mistreat animals
That photos are very impacting.
Photo and voice and little facts
Kind of because it had no facts.
Put it in info in the dog shop.


Dog fighting
That people do it but there doing it against there will.

PSA essay rough draft.

Persuasive Essay

In 2011, various groups of people hacked into the Japan based company: SONY.

All the online programs SONY had were hacked by unscrupulous groups like Lulzsec (which in native Australian means; laughing at your security). Some of the networks are Play station Network and Sony online entertainment. Only in the UK it will cost them 150 million pounds to pay the bill. If there were any case of fraud that number could soar up.

According to hacker’s tweets, SONY did not have a very secure protection for their users. It was relatively easy to access the users information, as SONY did not encode it. As a result, the personal information of more than 77 million users of SONYS online entertainment and play station was stolen.

The personal information robbed included dates of birth, email accounts, passwords, debit and credit card numbers.

Sony has apologized to its customers. But they also have offered to build real confidence for their customers. In its attempt to regain public confidence, SONY has installed many safety systems like a firewall that cost 2 million dollars to install. Also, it has hired a new security manager as well as another highly trained group of people who specialize in hackers.

The consequences of this security breach, has been catastrophic for some people. For example, Mr. James Cherrick had recently invested most of his savings in SONYS stock. With this hacking, the value of the stock dropped down to half its price causing a significant loss. Mr. Cherrick now has filed for bankruptcy. Poor Mr. Cherrick he is now poor just because a couple of people felt like making the world a worst place for everyone. Also SONY has been very affected. Experts say that it might take up to 10-20 years before customers have faith in SONY.

Why did those groups hack SONY?

They wanted to make easy money.  Those people should be ashamed of themselves. They should be spending their time working and not spending their days figuring how to ruin other people’s lives.  

Others say that the hackers are seeking revenge because they are the sons and daughters of parents who said " oh these guys (multinational companies) just robbed me from the promotion”. What really happened was that the other guy worked way harder. Now, their sons are doing this to get back at the people who supposedly did something to their family.

poster for grammar

Facts about Sony hacking

1. 77 million accounts were hacked
2. 7 days it took Sony to tell its users it had been hacked
3. The name of the group who hacked was we are legion
4. They call they main leader the anonymous
5. After a month the FBI had to help.
6.  A fire wall would cost 5000 monthly and to install 2 million dollars.
7. It is going to take up to 10 years before consumers have confidence in sony
8. an other group who hacked sony was LulzSec.
9. Both groups were australian
10. LulzSec in native australian means laughing at your security.

http://www.abc.net.au/worldtoday/content/2011/s3234894.htm
sources: http://www.mobiledia.com/news/111980.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/PlayStation_Network_outage
http://www.abc.net.au/worldtoday/content/2011/s3234894.htm

Video

Analysis of video. I saw a video that showed this man running through a desert and a man says the guy running uses Nike but the guy who is carrying the 50 pound camera uses Adidas.
Analysis: it really funny because the guy who is carrying the most weight but is never shown wears Adidas. Saying that Adidas is for real men and Nike is  for sissy.

POV is from the camera men saying that if they use nike they couldn't do their job adidas have the toughest   cleats. pathos they have somone as they do their job tell you that adidas don't give enough into their products so that they work for the camera man as he does his job.


http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F&gl=US#/watch?v=8TnG7jyfoWI

Rules for games

,The game is using jeopardy. People will chose a preposition and a number (100,200,300,400,500) the higher the number, the harder the question, but you also get more points if you answer a higher question. Ex, if you choose at 300, we will ask you a question that is the 3rd hardest at question. If you get it right, you get 300 points, but if you get it wrong you lose 400 points.

Mind map for PSA

Mind map for grammar

storyboard

Possible ways of listing our problem

1.We could tell a story: pro it would have a lot of facts we could interview people. Cons Most of what is put out for the public usually isn't what happened and to interview someone  that had something to do with the dilemma and that said the truth, it could be hard.
2. Showing Facts and photos of shocking images. Pro: photos really stick in a person mind and even more if they have facts to prove that this photo did happen. Con: Impacting pictures will be hard to find.
3. Physical model. Pros: we could show how the hacking took place and the distance (scale) and how fast it happened. Cons: you have to know how to use a computer because if not it will take a long time.
4.We could do a documentary. Pros: put an experts opinions, providing a big picture. Cons without many details. Long and complicated
5. Same scenario but different company/country. Pros: differences between the companies  and why they didn't get hacked. Cons: there public is different so there could be many variables.

I chose #1 because the it has a lot of cons and if we look in the right places I think I can Find the truth

TO get there by car yo have to take 100 street

This post card is FROM bogota

I did this FOR america

I was at my grandmas house AT 5:50

I was in and out in of the house in 15 seconds

Sentences

I don't like this author because he uses to much digressive time and goes on for hours about something that is not relevant.
The best part in the book is when there is suspense because there is so much tension and you don't know what is going to happen.
The best case of symbolism is in the hunger games when Katniss the mocking jay is the face the rebellion.
Only good authors know how to foreshadow without giving what is going to happen next.
Flashbacks are usually very important because it tells about the characters life before the incident happened.
When the author starts to feel a certain way because he entered to a certain place that how the atmosphere is and how it affects the character.
Plot twist is hard to do because is has to be a possible twist to the story but it has to be slightly extreme so that there is excitement.
Progressive time couldn't find definition

Why is the wild horses vid persuasive

1 because it show's some scene where there mistreating those poor animals. Also they say things like they tie us to our american past which means if you don't care you're not a good American. They say were exactly where to go to and  it makes them sound very expert on the topic. They assume your cooperation so you feel like you have to help.

what is style

style is how an author choses to tell the story to the reader . It depends on the personality of a writer

Ethos patthos and logos

Ethos: Get confidence from people ny saying very revelant things.
Pathos: Emotinal appeal
Logos: give vidence to back up what your saying.

What is style

Style is how an author writes and show his voice in his or her work.

Essay

People need to be better educated and studies have shown that a school that has a lot of computer and only uses computer had a better IQ that the ones that don't have any computer. Why? Because let’s say I have a computer and my friend doesn't, I have a question I can just Google it my friend has to find an encyclopedia and find it and waste half an hour. Better technology means better grade and it will be easier to get that grade. Kids now learn to right faster because they don't have to do only on paper but on a tablet which is easy to carry and you can do it as many times as you want without any shortage.


People should care about this because it could help them and their children too. This is mostly directed at parents because they haven’t learned how to use a computer, so first parents should learn how to use it. Technology is getting from bigger to bigger each time and the older generations have to start to adapt to it. IT’S EVOLUTION!!!!!! An analogy to technology is that were (younger generations) are natives to this kind of technology while older generations are immigrants.


15 % of parents don’t know how to use a computer with that also comes that there is no computer safety for their children (10% of the parents live in rural areas). Also company's that were extra tecnhological made more of a profit than other companies. This change shouldn't be painful it might be hard at first but then it will be easier than before and you will make more money in less time. But don't go over board because there are people who can no only have a conversation throgh an electronic device. The best you can do is have a between with the technology and non technology.

Essay

People need to be better educated and studies have shown that a school that has a lot of computer and only uses computer had a better IQ that the ones that don't have any computer. Why? Because lets say I have a computer and my friend doesn't, I have a question I can just google it my friend has to find a encyclopedia and find it and waste half an hour. Better technology means better grade and it will be easier to get that grade