grammar quizes

In the first quiz I learned that, the length of a sentence has no effect on the run ons.

In the second quiz I learned that, who refers to people and that and which refer to groups or things

In the third quiz I learned that, a compound sentence means that it has a dependent clause a complex has two independent clause and compound complex is when there is a dependent clause and two independent clauses.

OUTLINE

Character development

Character development is when the authors tell you about the characters. For example if you put an ordinary name and an ordinary life you don't think any thing is going to happen because he is just a normal boy that's character devolment.
Conflict with th main character that van tell you if the character has a problem with something like school or work or at home.
Setting if it's at a beach I think it is either going to be a fun with almost no plot or conflict or it has a shark in it but if in the woods at night it more likely to be a scary story.

The authors do that because there's a character who does nothing it almost invisible and BOOM he let's say goes and fights for his friend the author made us think that he wasn't important to give us the small surprise. That's why the author do that,

brian storm for myth

1st idea. Homework and how hard it is to do and how smart people bothering you.

Characters me and my best 7 friend, and 1 or 2 nerds and a monster.

Setting. A middle school but when it's attacked by the monster it becomes a military training base so that the military can train on how to fight a real monster.

Problem. One problem is that homework is hard and that people call you stupid.  Problem number 2 is that a person gets so bothered about homework, that he becomes a monster and destroys all kinds of homework in the world and then starts to destroy CNG middle school and the CIA and FBI come to stop him.

They shoot the monster with a tranquilizing dart and he rises to the gods of homework to be sanctioned but there is no trace of homework so there is no more homework anymore.

1 monster 2 how people lived 3 social structure 4 a invented god

2^nd idea. Gossip and how people invent bad stories about you because they think its funny.

Characters, some people who made up the gossip, the one who the gossip was about and the gossip god.

Setting. Room M4

Problem.  A boy gets so annoyed about the gossip about him that he calls the Gossip God and the king of the gods, ESOB says that he will talk to the people that are messing with him. The gossipers don’t believe ESOB so he has no choice but to curse them in the worst way, that is to make them mute.

3^rd idea. A vegan cafeteria at a middle school in France.

Problem, the kids love all kinds of food, cheese, pastries, escargot but they are in a vegan school.

Characters. French snob students who love food.  

Setting.  Middle School in Paris.

French kids arrive to vegan school; they don’t like it so they ask the gods for help. The oldest boy tells the god that he will travel to the end of the world to find the best and most delicious meat and cheese in the world to show that being vegan is stupid.  Zeus responds that why go through all that work, he says, why don’t you ask them to change the menu?

No weird travels have to take place.

Completely imaginary observed or knowing people and touch of you in them

Who is the hero

Make them very in-depth by different characteristics 
What is there ambition and or talent
what is there deep dark secret
  Give them a best friend
Worst enemy and why
Also what we carry in our pocket
The names are important to what there are
Bring character to life make action 


They do that so that the author can choose what they want us to feel about the certain character 

That which and who

That is has a broader span of what it could be like it could be referring to a "type of person" (quotation from Englishplus.com). Which is likely only to be used when refering things. Who us the exact opposite it is only used when referring to people.

WHO. used incorrectly, who is that. used correctly, who could be  that person who is looking so much at us
THAT. used incorrectly, that is not cool. used correctly, that was a heck of a ride
Which used correctly, hey give me my game back which I was going to give to my brother but he already left beacause your taking so long to give it to me. USED INCORRECTLY, which of them is your girlfriend

 A run on sentence is a one where the ideas could be differnt sentence like.

I like pizza, the girls lost the game, and the coach is mad.

compound complex sentences are good sentences that are not run on doing the ex drom above it would be.
I like pizza. The girls lost the game. The coach was mad.

One of the problems that occurs during middle school is gossip. Because they make lies that hurt mentally and then more people get on the joke not knowing how much it can actually do. An other one is homework because were getting to the grades that if you don't do your home its really bad unlike in elementary that you can just make up for it. Something that goes with homework is grades because now its important because there is A.P college and it gets really stressing.